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Man, this reads like one of those rare and wonderful dreams that end too early where you wish you could fall back asleep and pick up where it left off. Keep at it!

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Thanks. I’m trying to write more short story’s.

They’re more challenging but I find them more fun.

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Nice work! You created a world without all the scaffolds showing and left the reader wanting more.

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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. I don’t get a lot of love for fiction on Substack

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Yeeehaw!

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Great story!

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Thanks, it was a 1,000 word limit so I am glad it turned out well

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